the police report, your not the first to mention it. how should i go about changing the listing of events, and still not tell details, leaving stuff up to the reader? being a personal story it was hard to step aside and write it without writing all the emotions involved, yet i tried to keep them in.

i watched star wars ep2 last night, yoda was prolly a huge influence. :P

how do i keep that slice of life feel through out its whole? i like the animal-rawness that i think im able to convey, yet i think changing stuff around would cause that to disappear.

tons of questions i could ask.