Well, it seemed like those were the only two corners that weren't rounded. Felt like you'd just missed them.

Quote:
how about a crack edit job on the text

Okey-doke:

Features:
  • "all together" should be "altogether"
  • "One button" should be "One-button"
  • "contents scrolls" might should be "contents scroll" or "content scrolls", or maybe not

That's all I see worth commenting about, other than to note that you've got a lot of em-dashes and wonder if they're really all appropriate.

EDIT: fixed open list tag -robircc
Thanks. I should really preview posts more often. -wfaulk


Edited by wfaulk (17/06/2006 13:35)